Thursday, November 17, 2011

Blog 7 Revision of CATW practice test 2 "The Woman Who Died in the Waiting Room"

he Hospitals in the United States

     Many hospitals in the United States have been found negligent with their patients. This is happening in general, but  mostly in psychiatric institutions. In the article  "A Woman Who Died in the Waiting Room" by Jeneen Interlandy, he stated a particular case of a elderly lady who was left by her self in the waiting room of a Brooklyn psychiatric hospital while several members of the staff ignored her, in spite of her delicate situation, which brought her to dead. I agree with this asseveration and I know from a personal experience that this is happening every days in almost all the public hospitals in New York City and all over the United States. Unfortunately the poor and undocumented only can go to these kind of public services because of the lack  of economic resources what makes them the more affected population as this passage affirms.

    I almost died when I was delivering my baby in the Elmhurst Hospital of Queens, NY, where I had been checked for the last 5 months before my due date, therefore they knew that I was a high risk pregnant woman and that I needed to get a proper treatment and care. But instead they left me by myself in a room for the whole night while I was bleeding and suffering of big pain without the proper care of a nurse or doctor who could give the order that a C-section was needed. They kept me in that room until the next day until a friend of mine came to the hospital and alarmed them after she saw my situation. She told them that I was not an illegal person, that my husband was in the USA Army and that this issue could finish in the close of the hospital, if I die or my baby. This warning made them act immediately. So they took me to the surgery room and did the C-Section to me.
            In the article I read says that the illegals and poor are the most affected and it is true. I went to the Elmhurst Hospital because many people there speak Spanish and, then I was unable to speak English. At the beginner of my pregnancy I went to the Manhattan Physician Center where I was supposed to go with my insurance and the difference was enormous. It was so clean and no too crowded, obviously due to the fact that not many people can have access to this services, therefore, the majority have to go where is “free” or accessible for them. But it this fear or equal?
            On February 2nd, 2009 I could have died if my friend wouldn’t come and claimed the proper care for me. That is how I learned that in this country you must fight for being professional and learn English because if   I was been well informed and able to speak English, I would be treated in a good health institution where I luckily would have the possibility of going, and I still wonder what is the danger and risk of the people who never could go to a good health service institution, what will be their destiny?
            The services of health in the United States must be improved to the level that everybody can have equality in the services and care even the undocumented, poor and mentally ill because the first two work very hard every days to keep this country economic, and the third one are disable members of this community.  Without a good health care no one  could be hardworking and be productive and at the end the country will lose its wealthy and power.   

Tuesday, November 15, 2011

Blog 6 "Personal Directions for the CATW"

     First, write in extreme detail what you must do the day of the test (what to do with the text, how you will go about writing, what paragraphs must have etc)
   I am very anxious about taking the CATW in December 1rst, so I will be writing my own directions which will help me to do really well that day.

     First thing I going to do is be on time I going to be there fifteen or twenty minutes before the test start. So I can be ready and relax before the test start. Once they give me the order to start it  I will read the prompt carefully trying to get the main points regarding the essays is about, after that I, will read it one more time, but this time I will be underlining the main ideas that I have already figure out, then I can have material for my summary because I must include all of them on it.

      Once I have the main points underlined, I will write them down in my own words and I will do some brainstorming while  reading  again the prompt to get some key words and ideas which I feel more confident with (yes, for me is necessary to read the prompt three times, I admit it because of many unknown words).  I will write for ten minutes free writing, then I am going to start my summary making sure include all the main points that I have already figured out. I will choose a nice introductory sentence to make my essay more attractive and I also will include all the main points in my summary, before I leave the paragraph I will agree or disagree with the author ideas and in my mind I will pick one to develop my essay on it. However I will be writing down this idea to keep it in mind all the time during the test time.

      Examples and evidences are very important, therefore I will start the second paragraph with a nice example from something that I have experienced before in my life. It could be a learning experience in my country or here in the United States or something that I have lived or read. I am sure I going to find something interesting to write about in my examples, I will give at least two examples, one in the second paragraph and one in the third paragraph. After I plenty write and enjoy writing my examples, in the next paragraph I will conclude through give and overview all over the previous part of my essay and I will be giving an overall conclusion regarding the subject I am talking about.

    Then write also is extreme detail what are the things you have to look out for, based on previous practice tests. Spelling? Which words? Grammar? What mistakes? Problems with development? What kinds of problems? Timing yourself? Test anxiety?  

    I have failed in my two previous practice tests. I am sure that if I had better grammar and spelling I will have more chance to pass a least the second one, so this time I will make sure to check my grammar and look out for the words I am using in the dictionary. That will help me a lot with my grade. In other side I will be writing a good planned essay then I will develop it in better way than before. Planning is a very good tool that will be very helpful for a well develop essay.

Finally, write how you plan to help yourself with the problems in item 2.
 

      I will bring a proper dictionary to correct all my mistakes in words. I will rest well the night before and eat properly so I won't feel struggling with these necessities while taking the test. I will distribute the time in a way that I will be using my ninety minutes in the best way. Reading: 10 minutes, brainstorm: 10 minutes; writing a summary: 10 minutes, develop my examples: 20 minutes each; conclusion: 10 minutes and the remaining time I will use it for review my beautiful and well developed essay. Next time I take a test I will relax and think that it is only a test and that I won't die if I do not pass because for me stress before and during the test make me very confuse and out of the track. I will memorize these instructions because I can not go through all of them if I do not remember them, for me is good to memorize things at the time to take a test. I hope all these steps will help me to pass the CATW test on December first because I really want to get into ENG-101 next spring, but if for any reason I have to come back to this class at least I'll know I will have the knowledge about the points and what is an assays and its components which I did not have an idea before I start this class.

Thank you,

Zoila Victoria